Wow

That is great for a first flash! 100% better then most of the crap that shows up here. I am honestly supprized this doesnt have a higher score... most likely becasue people vote bad if it doesnt have porn or violence.. but anyway that is a great flash keep making more. One suggestion is to maybe not hold it so long on the girl. Other then that awsome job for your first flash!!

Nice!

That was a very good flash! Keep up the good work!
Maybe for the next one make it so you can see the mother for longer, the only way i could tell what it was, was by reading the credits and infuring that that object was the mother.